I want to be in a different story.  I don’t want to read this whole novel as the character of Jacqueline.  I want to be someone else.  Someone that’s brighter, smarter, more honest, good-hearted, talented, and independent.  Someone that can make everything right, because my character doesn’t know how to make the world a better place.  This whole storyline wasn’t as expected, not in the “wow what in insatiable twist” way. No, as in “what a unimaginative, nauseating, vile ‘climax’ to what was deemed a hopeful tale. Crashed and burned” way. I hope she dies in the end.  I need another story.